with crimson eyes you could control the sea
even the voice of you, comes crashing in me
i stand here as the winds begged me to stay
even when i walk, i slow drift away
can it be this realm of suffice
like a gambler rolling the dice
in every word that roams in my mind
i took the time to look back and rewind
up til now i ask for one thing
to use my voice and let it sing
i don’t have much to give
only thing i ask is for some reason to live
Wonderful ! Keep one writing!
Dwight
thank you so much for the comment. is there anything you would like me to write about in poetry?
Write about your life experiences and look around you and write what inspires you,
I shall look forward to future posts and thank you for choosing to follow one of my blogs.
thank you for the comment. how can i become a better writer or make my writing hold its ground.
Anybody can improve their writing by writing and by reading. Best wishes.
thank you so much for the advice. ill be reading alot more of everyones stuff
Thank you!